Okay, I've got no idea who'll read this...
but here is one of my songs. It's called about you and is about love. Very original subject (not):

It was an ordinary day

I’d come in and the teacher would say

You’re late, get a note

I would go to get one

And there to me you stood

I said hi ‘cause I didn’t want to be rude

You make me dizzy

Make me nervous

Make my heart speed up ‘cause

I love your eyes and the sound of your voice when you talk

Love your nose, mouth and the way that you walk

I never knew I would

Didn’t even know I could

Love somebody like I do now

I have no idea how

I’ve never felt this before

But I want more and more

You make me dizzy

Make me nervous

Make my heart speed up ‘cause

I love your eyes and the voice of your voice when you talk

Love your nose, mouth and the way that you walk

And of course there was the curiosity

How it would feel when you’d kiss me

It was great and something I’ll never forget

Something I will remember until I’m dead

The feeling of your lips on mine

And my heart giving me the sign

That you make me dizzy

Make me nervous

Make my heart speed up ‘cause

I love your eyes and the sound of your voice when you talk

Love your nose, mouth and the way that you walk

You’re the piece of my life that’s always been missin’

My life’s now complete

We look at each other and start kissin’

And I love you

From my head all the way down to my feet

You still make me dizzy

Still make me nervous

And still make my heart speed up ‘cause

I love your eyes and the sound of your voice when you talk

Love your nose, mouth and the way that you walk

More and more each day

More and mooooore

Mooooore and mooooore

The last part is just when I sing it, which I've never done yet because I haven't made music to this song yet.

Please tell me what you think about it and give tips and advise! ^-^

© 2011 Maaike de Boer